A story by Rachel.CHAPTER ONE.One cold wintry day a girl name Puciana woke up from sleeping in her cardboard box. A big gust of wind blew from her window and the box tipped her over and she fell on her face.
"Ouch" said Pu.
She got up and felt something in her pocket.. it was a ticket! Pu was so amazed, she read the ticket:
"HI5 CONCERT - 20TH JULY 2007"
Puciana was really excited because she absolutely LOVED hi5.
"I'm so excited because i absolutely love hi5!" said Pu.
Then Pu's eyes widened and her head spun around in a circle. TODAY was the 20th of July! Puciana was going to the concert TODAY!
Pu ran down the stairs and tripped over a needle which was stuck in the carpet because her mum loved sewing.
"Ouch" said Puciana.
She looked at her toe and she saw that she was missing the middle toe on her right foot.
Pu screamed.. then she shrugged her shoulders.
"Who cares" sad Pu. "I'm going to the hi5 concert!"
CHAPTER TWO."hey pupu" said Rat-chel, Pu's friend, who looked like a rat.
"Pu, wat are you doing here? where did you get that ticket?" said
astrid"YEAHH! hi5 is only for COOL people, you're not cool!" said
herra"I agree" said
neil. "Peace" said
nick.astrid began spinning around and aounrd in a circle. no one understood why, she just did.
david laughed, then nick stuck his foot out and astrid tripped over and fell onto
rat. Rat got angry and pullled astrid's hair. Astrid screamed so loud that an old woman walking across the road 5km away heard the scream and got a heart attack and died.
"Hey guys!, OMYGOSH IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS CONCERT!!" said Pu.
Pu began jumping up and down in the middle of the concert hall. Neil felt very embarassed and he poked a stick into Pu's ear. Pu's head jerked at 150km/h and it hit a girl who was standing behind her.
Girl: "Wat the? OW THAT HURTS! HEY YOU! COME HERE YOU! YOU! YOU!"
Pu realised wat she did and she ran away into the crowd. when she thought she was far away enough Puciana started jumping up and down again with excitement, and rat wasnt there to tell her off.
CHAPTER THREE.are you getting bored yet?
CHAPTER FOUR. if you are you can stop reading now.
CHAPTER FIVE.no? okay =]
CHAPTER SIX. Pu had been jumping up and down non-stop for 15 minutes by now. Suddenly her knee gave way and she found herself on the floor. People were walking past her and suddenly a man stepped on her face.
"Ouch" said Pu.
The man looked down.
Man: "Oh sorry, i didn't see you. are u alright?"
Pu: "Oh i'm okay, i think that toothpick that was stuck in your shoe is in my eye though"
Man: "Oh sorry"
The man pulled the toothpick out of Pu's eye and her eyeball came out. The man stared at the eyeball on the toothpick in awe. So did Pu.
Then Pu looked up and realised that i was nathan from hi5!
"Wow! you're nathan from hi5!" said Pu.
"Why yes, yes i am!" said Nathan.
"I am you're BIGGEST FAN! when ever you sing, i sit down on the floor and meditate to your voice! i have pictures of you ALL over my wall and i kiss all 20 of them goodnight before i go to sleep!" said Pu.
Nathan began to get freaked out. He laughed politely and handed the toothpick with Pu's eyeball stuck on it back to Pu and ran away. Pu chased after him.
Suddenly she dropped the toothpick holiding her eyeball and she slipped on the eyeball. The blood and fluid from the eyeball splurted all over the floor and nathan slipped on it too.
CHAPTER SEVEN.Nathan from hi5 ended up dying from banging his head on the floor. Pu became depressed and she started cutting herself. However, Pu's left eyeball was gone so what she thought was her wrist, was actually her hand and she ended up cutting all her fingers off.
THE END.